That Halo Thing: ep4 Pretty lame
I just did not find this submission to be enjoyable. I think you need to add more humor, or add more action... or both. One thing I noticed is that you spelled "chief" incorrectly on multiple occasions. Your profile doesn't say how old you are, but I would guess that you're 13. Maybe you should brush-up on your flash skills a little more.
Another thing I don't get is sprite movies... I've seen some pretty good ones (VGDC series), and I've seen some pretty bad ones (like this one). You need to realize, as a flash artist, that if you're going to be lazy on the graphics (use sprites), then you HAVE to back it up somehow! Going lazy on everything makes your movie suck. For example, you were too lazy to record your own audio! People don't want to have to read each line while your lame music plays in the background. If you're going to continue this series in sprites, you need to kick it up a few notches in audio, plot, action, and humor. Otherwise, you'll just be wasting your time on half-assed shitty movies that no one will ever enjoy watching (besides you, of course).
